Question

【題目】初級(jí)寫作

寒假( winter vacation)就要到了，怎樣度過(guò)一個(gè)豐富多彩的寒假？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以My Resolutions for the Winter Vacation為題寫一篇短文。

要求：字跡工整，文意通順，適度發(fā)揮；所給提示必須全部用上；詞數(shù)80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示：1.多多鍛煉，保持健康；

2．好好學(xué)習(xí)，完成好作業(yè)；

3．回家多和家人交流；

4．空余時(shí)間打算學(xué)點(diǎn)什么？

5．你還有些什么愿望呢？（寫1-2條）

My Resolutions for the Winter Vacation

My winter vacation is coming soon.____

Answer 1

【答案】

My Resolutions for the Winter Vacation

The winter vacation is coming.I am going to relax myself. I will do sports every day such as playing basketball and table tennis because doing sports can keep us healthy. I am going to visit my friends and relatives. I am sure we’ll have a good time together. Of course, I am going to do some housework and learn how to cook because doing housework can help me grow up. And I will often talk with our family.I will finish doing my homework on time and review what was learnt. I am going to the bookshop to buy some interesting books because I like reading very much. I am sure I will have meaningful and happy holidays.

【解析】

試題分析：短文敘述了自己假期的計(jì)劃，所以句子的主語(yǔ)用第一人稱，句子一般用將來(lái)時(shí)，要注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，注意上下文的銜接，使用一些高級(jí)詞匯。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：do sports做運(yùn)動(dòng)；keep sb+形容詞；have a good time玩的開(kāi)心；talk with和某人談?wù)摚?/span>finish doing sth完成做某事；用了because引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。