Question

【題目】短文寫作

共享單車(bike-sharing)被譽(yù)為中國(guó)現(xiàn)代新四大發(fā)明之一。如今廈門的大街小巷也隨處可見共享單車的身影。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要介紹共享單車的發(fā)展及使用方法，并表達(dá)一下你自己對(duì)共享單車的看法。

Development	First used in Holland,1965
	introduced in China in 2007
	been popular since 2016
Instruction	scan the QR code(二維碼)
	unlock the smart lock
	pay the bill
Opinion	healthy,...
	blocking(堵塞) the way,...

要求：

1.必須包含所提示信息，字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右；

2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；

3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)姓名、校名及提示信息之外的地名。

提示詞：shared bikes 共享的自行車

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Answer 1

【答案】With the development of the economy, shared bikes are seen everywhere. It was first used in Holland in 1965. It was introduced in China in 2007 and it has been popular since 2016.How can we use the shared bikes? Firstly, we need to scan the QR code if we want to use them.Secondly, when we get to our destination, we should unlock the smart lock. Finally, we need to pay the bill.

Different people have different opinions about shared bikes. Some people believe that riding shared bikes is healthy. It can build up our body. However, others argues that it blocks the way. In my opinion, it is good to ride shared bikes, because it is good for our health. What’s more, we can enjoy beautiful scenery. Nevertheless, we should use them properly.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)表格中所給出的內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要介紹共享單車的發(fā)展及使用方法，并表達(dá)一下你自己對(duì)共享單車的看法。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要是第一、第三人稱。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。