Question

【題目】寫作

根據(jù)下列表格內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，介紹一下你上周末的活動(dòng)。

when		activities
last Saturday	morning	go bike riding
	afternoon	go fishing
	evening	go to the movies
last Sunday	all the day	go sightseeing
	evening	rest

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Answer 1

【答案】

I am going to have fun this weekends. On Saturday morning I"m going bike riding with my best friend. In the afternoon I"m going fishing with my father. I like fishing very much. And in the evening, I"m going to the movies with my family. We"re going to watch a comedy. I think it"s very interesting. Then on Sunday, I am going sightseeing in our city all the day. Maybe it can help me know much about our city. And on Sunday evening I"m going to have a rest, because I"m going to school tomorrow. A great vacation! I can"t wait!

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹上周末的活動(dòng)。小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如Then on Sunday, I am going sightseeing in our city all the day. Maybe it can help me know much about our city.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。