Question

暑期即將來(lái)臨，對(duì)于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個(gè)假期，家長(zhǎng)們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，描述他們的不同看法，同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對(duì)暑期安排的觀點(diǎn)。

Parents’ opinions	get ready for high school do some housework …
Kids’ opinion	have a good rest do some sightseeing …
Your opinion	…

注意：1. 表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考，允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3. 文中部的出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息；
4. 詞數(shù)：80-100。
How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.

Answer 1

One possible version ：
How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the summer, so it’s necessary to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But many children disagree. They think it’s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends and do some sightseeing.
In my opinion, we children can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.  We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It’s good for us to have a trip or do some sports. (103 words)

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: get ready for為……做準(zhǔn)備；強(qiáng)調(diào)句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)怎么樣等；hang out閑逛等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。