Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

最近，你們學(xué)校開展了以“中國夢，我的夢”為主題的活動，作為一名中學(xué)生應(yīng)該有自己的夢想，你的夢想是什么呢？請根據(jù)所給是題目用英語寫一篇短文，表達(dá)自己的夢想以及如何實現(xiàn)這個夢想。

要求：1.語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；

2. 文中不得使用真實姓名。

My dream

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Answer 1

【答案】

My dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven. I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.

To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己的夢想以及如何實現(xiàn)它。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時和一般將來時，人稱為單數(shù)第一、第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My dream is...；When I was...； Now I’m ...；In order to ....； I’ll give my love to......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己夢想會實現(xiàn)的愿望。

亮點說明：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了自己的愿望，接下來介紹產(chǎn)生這個愿望的原因，最后指出如何實現(xiàn)自己的愿望。此處用了were very friendly to，cheered me up， hoped to，achieve my dream， as much as possible，out of danger 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。