Question

【題目】假如你是王平， 你的英國朋友Harry正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語， 請你就漢語學(xué)習(xí)方面給他寫封電子郵件， 向他介紹一下如何學(xué)好漢語。詞數(shù)不少于100， 開頭已給出， 不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Harry，

How are you?______________________________________________________________

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Yours

Wang Ping

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Harry，

How are you? I am very glad to receive your letter. Now let me tell you something about how to learn Chinese well. Learning Chinese just like learning any other foreign language, needs hard work. Learning Chines takes time so you should spend as much time as you can. Use Chinese whenever you can. This is very important. The more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. So why not take every oppotunity to practise using Chinese for communication. And you'd better listen to the tape and repeat after it, watch Chinese films and TV programmes, read Chinese stories and newspapers and so on. "No pains, no gains". If we work hard, I am sure we will learn Chinese well. That's all. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours

Wang Ping

【解析】這是一篇材料作文。以郵件的形式向自己的好友介紹一下如何學(xué)好漢語。需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多，要圍繞How to learn Chinese well這一主旨精心準備材料，注意句子的完整性和表達的準確性，例如主謂一致等。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：該篇作文緊扣材料，要點完整，表達準確通暢。開門見山，對于如何學(xué)好漢語提出自己的幾點合理化的建議。最后復(fù)合句的運用If we work hard, I am sure we will learn Chinese well.提出了自己的希望，讓人容易接受。