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【題目】書面表達

為了節(jié)能環(huán)保及方便出行，提高生活質(zhì)量，蘇州市政府近年來在很多地段為市民免費提供自行車服務(wù)，但部分市民對此了解不夠。假如你是一位志愿者，周日上午，你來到中心廣場對市民進行自行車借用宣傳。請根據(jù)以下提示寫出一篇演講稿。

提示：1. 蘇州市民可以在很多地方免費借用自行車，非常方便；

2. 如果借用自行車，請注意愛惜，并及時歸還；

3. 希望大家多騎車出行……（請至少列出騎車出行的兩點好處。）

要求：1. 演講稿內(nèi)容必須包括以上提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；寫一篇90字左右的演講稿。演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：resident, convenient, low-carbon, advantage

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!

May I have your attention, please? I'm glad to tell you something about using bikes for free in Suzhou. _______________________________________________________________________

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Thank you for your listening. Have a nice weekend!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!

May I have your attention, please? I’m a volunteer. I’m glad to tell you something about using bikes for free in Suzhou. As we all know, environment pollution and energy waste have become some of the most important topics in this world. The best way to solve these problems is to live a low-carbon life. Since Suzhou is a crowded industrialized city, it is very necessary for our residents to change ways of traffic and take advantages from free bikes provided in dozens of rental points all round the city. Moreover, it is obviously convenient if we ride a free bike in a traffic jam. However, if you make a decision to use free bike service, please take care of the bike and return it on time. Remember, riding a bike is not only good for our city, but also for your health.

Thank you for your listening. Have a nice weekend!

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求寫一篇演講稿，演講稿的內(nèi)容是對市民進行自行車借用宣傳。根據(jù)提綱提示，寫作時要注意以下寫作要點：1. 蘇州市民可以在很多地方免費借用自行車，非常方便；2. 如果借用自行車，請注意愛惜，并及時歸還；3. 希望大家多騎車出行……短文用第一人稱形式，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。

寫作亮點：本范文開頭是簡短的問候和自我介紹；接下來從環(huán)境問題入筆，自然引出保護環(huán)境，過低碳生活，使用蘇州市提供的免費自行車，然后講述它的優(yōu)點、注意事項等等。最后是結(jié)束語。短文條理分明，表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。所大量使用的復(fù)雜句式及短語句型等等使短文生動，增加了可讀性和感染力。