Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請你根據(jù)下表，寫一篇題為”Helen’s living habits”的短文，介紹海倫的日常生活習(xí)慣。

要求：可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但必須包含表格中的所有信息，70詞左右。

	Activities	How often
Good habits	exercise eat fruit and vegetables help with housework	every afternoon every day often
Bad habits	stay up late eat junk food	sometimes three or four times a week

Helen’s living habits

Helen is a middle school students. ______________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Helen’s living habits

Helen is a middle school student. She has lots of good habits. She loves she loves sports and she exercises for half an hour every afternoon. She eats fruit and vegetables every day. At home， she often helps with housework. However， Helen has some bad habits. Sometimes she stays up late to watch or go online. And she eats junk food three or four times a week although she knows it’s bad for her health.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹海倫的生活習(xí)慣。寫前要認(rèn)真閱讀表格內(nèi)容，主要從好習(xí)慣以及壞習(xí)慣兩方面來加以描述。根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可知，人稱為第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，這就要注意到主謂一致的問題。在語言的組織上要注意使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，以及長短句的交替使用，這樣可以形成文章的亮點(diǎn)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇書面表達(dá)段落清晰，層次分明，語言通順流暢。不僅要點(diǎn)描述齊全，而且使用了豐富的句式。如And she eats junk food three or four times a week although she knows it’s bad for her health.等，給樸素的語言增加了幾分色彩。由此可見作者的英語功底很扎實(shí)。