Question

【題目】書面表達

你們學校正在創(chuàng)建鎮(zhèn)江市節(jié)水型學校，倡議全體師生關注水資源，節(jié)約用水。請你根據(jù)下列表格，寫一篇80字左右的作文。

節(jié)約用水

重要性

離開水人類就無法生存。

現(xiàn)狀

1. 可供人類飲用的水越來越少。

2. 浪費水的情況……

3. 水污染現(xiàn)象……

措施

1、 節(jié)約每一滴水，如：……

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Answer 1

【答案】

As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water whichis suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think whatwe can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構思好文章的結構，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結構清晰完整，表達準確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have tosave every drop of water as possible as we can.等等。