Question

【題目】書面表達（15分）

以“My Ideal Home”為題寫一篇短文，向你的朋友介紹你的理想家園。

提示：1.理想家園的總體概況。

2.理想家園共有幾層及每層的設(shè)施。

My Ideal Home

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Ideal Home

Everyone has an ideal home. I also have one. My ideal home is very big. It has three floors with a beautiful garden behind it. On the ground floor, there is a sitting room and a KTV room, because I love singing very much. On the first floor, I have a nice bathroom and I can have a bath comfortably. And I study and sleep on the second floor. It’s quiet here.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，介紹你的理想家園。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Everyone has...，It has...，there is...，And I study...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意連詞的運用，文章連貫、通順。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我有一個理想的家園，接下來介紹我的理想家園的位置、層次和設(shè)施，最后介紹自己在理想的家園所做的事。此處on the ground floor, sitting room, love doing sth, have a bath等這些詞組的運用和介詞短語with a beautiful garden behind it作后置定語也讓文章增色不少。