Question

【題目】你是學(xué)生會主席。本周六學(xué)校將組織學(xué)生參觀自然博物館。請你以學(xué)生會的名義寫一份通知，內(nèi)容如下:

1.集合時間、地點:上午9點，學(xué)校操場

2.時間安排:乘大巴車前往；參觀2小時；12點左右回到學(xué)校

3.活動內(nèi)容:了解一些野生動物的情況，參觀活動后將討論最喜愛的動物，并寫一篇參觀日記。

4.注意事項:遵守博物館參觀須知(至少寫出3項)；注意保管好個人物品；記住車號，按時返回

1.集合時間、地點:上午9點，學(xué)校操場

2.時間安排:乘大巴車前往；參觀2小時；12點左右回到學(xué)校

3.活動內(nèi)容:了解一些野生動物的情況，參觀活動后將討論最喜愛的動物，并寫一篇參觀日記。

4.注意事項:遵守博物館參觀須知(至少寫出3項)；注意保管好個人物品；記住車號，按時返回

要求: 1.詞數(shù)80個左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2.用上表格內(nèi)所有的內(nèi)容提示, 自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容必須圍繞主題。

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

Notice

Our school will organize a trip to the Nature Museum this Saturday.

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Students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】請參考范文：

Notice

Our school will organize a trip to the Nature Museum this Saturday.And we will meet on the school playground at 9 o'clock in the morning.

The Nature Museum is full of all kinds of wild animals,and we will have a whole day there.In the morning,students can visit the Nature Museum themselves.Then,there will be a nice lunch.In the afternoon,we will go on a group tour to learn about some wild animals.After visiting the Nature Museum,we can discuss our favorite animals together.Finally,we need to write a visiting diary.

It is important that all of us should observe the museum visiting instructions and take care of our personal belongings.

Please remember the number and return on time.

Have a great day ！

Students’ Union

【解析】

本題提供一篇范文供參考。

請參考范文：

Notice

Our school will organize a trip to the Nature Museum this saturday.And we will meet on the school playground at 9 o'clock in the morning.

The Nature Museum is full of all kinds of wild animals,and we will have a whole day there.In the morning,students can visit the Nature Museum themselves.Then,there will be a nice lunch.In the afternoon,we will go on a group tour to learn about some wild animals.After visiting the Nature Museum,we can discuss our favorite animals together.Finally,we need to write a visiting diary.

It is important that all of us should observe the museum visiting instructions and take care of our personal belongings.

Please remember the number and return on time.

Have a great day ！

Students’ Union

范文中的高分點主要有：（1）善用連詞，如And then,Finally等；（2）思維邏輯，行為需富于層次感，如文中的上午，中午，下午，分別用In the morning，In the afternoon；（3）特殊的帶有強調(diào)意味的句子的使用，如：It is important that all of us should observe the museum visiting instructions and take care of our personal belongings.使用的結(jié)構(gòu)是It is important that.....后面接的是完整的一個句子。