Question

【題目】書面表達（15分） 每年夏天，溺水事故頻發(fā)。 請你就此寫一篇短文談談你的看法。

內容包括：

1.我們應該如何防止此類事故發(fā)生？（兩點建議）

2.如果看到有人落水，我們應該如何施救？

3.呼吁同學們熱愛生命，注意安全。

作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中提到出現(xiàn)的學校真實姓名。

2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。作文的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫在答題卡上。

Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?

Answer 1

【答案】

Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?In my opinion, we shouldn’t go swimming in dangerous places or places we know little abou, such sa reservoies and rivers . Second , we had better not swim when we feel tired or hungry.

If we see someone fall into the water, we shouldsave him in a perpor way . For example , we can shout loudly as we can to get those with good swimming skills to help him.

Life is valuable . We should take it seriously. We must remember that safety should always come first while swimming.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類的作文。根據提示內容主要寫兩點關于如何防止溺水的建議，發(fā)現(xiàn)落水，我們應該怎么做，對人們發(fā)出注意安全的呼吁。我們主要用到提建議的句式：we should/ had better/we can 等等。注意if條件狀語從句的應用。

寫作亮點：這篇短文內容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運用恰當。如提建議的句式：In my opinion, we shouldn’t go…, we had better not swim….條件狀語從句等。