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【題目】親愛(ài)的同學(xué)們，七年級(jí)這學(xué)期就要結(jié)束了, 暑假即將來(lái)臨。在這一年的中學(xué)生活中，你一定結(jié)交了許多好朋友。請(qǐng)以My best friend 為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹一下你最好的朋友Daniel。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

個(gè)人信息	Daniel，13歲，七年級(jí)一班
個(gè)性品質(zhì)	1. 聰明、興趣廣泛； 2. 喜愛(ài)動(dòng)物； 3. 善良、樂(lè)于助人（舉一例）。
暑假計(jì)劃	1. 多讀書(shū)來(lái)了解世界； 2. 幫父母做家務(wù)； 3. 和父母去旅游，因?yàn)?/span>…

要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括所給所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。

3.字?jǐn)?shù)：80左右，開(kāi)頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

4.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和校名。

My best friend

Daniel is my best friend.______________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】My best friend

Daniel is my best friend. He is 13 years old and he is in Class 1, Grade 7.

He is clever, and he can learn things quickly. He works hard at all his lessons. He has many hobbies, such as reading, singing and doing sports. He loves animals, so he keeps a rabbit as a pet and takes good care of it at home. He is kind and helpful. He often helps his classmates with their lessons. (此處發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)關(guān)于樂(lè)于助人的信息即可)

Summer holiday is coming soon and he has his own summer holiday plan. He will do more reading to learn more about the world. Also, he will help his parents do some housework. He plans to go travelling with his parents. In this way, he can visit interesting places and make new friends. (此處發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)和父母去旅游的原因即可)

This is my best friend Daniel. I hope he will be better in the future.

【解析】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)表格中的信息，介紹自己最好的朋友，短文應(yīng)包括所給所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。人稱為第三人稱，介紹個(gè)人信息及品質(zhì)時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，介紹暑假計(jì)劃時(shí)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。