Question

【題目】根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：80-100詞。

初中生活即將結(jié)束，你將步入人生下一階段．在今后的生活中，為了成為一個(gè)更好的自己，你對(duì)自己有哪些承諾？請(qǐng)從以下幾個(gè)方面進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

要求：

1．語(yǔ)意連貫，層次清晰，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范．

2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名與校名．

3．短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

My junior high school days will be over．Before setting out on my new journey，I want to make promises to myself．

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

My junior high school days will be over．Before setting out on my new journey，I want to make promises to myself．

As for family，I will cherish the days we stay together．Because they are so important to me．For friends，I hope I can keep the long friendship via communicating with them and opening my heart to them．For my study，I will try my best to work hard．For my body，I will do more sports and keep healthy．

I will do as above，and then I will have a happy life．

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。初中生活即將結(jié)束，你將步入人生下一階段。在今后的生活中，為了成為一個(gè)更好的自己，你對(duì)自己有哪些承諾？要求根據(jù)材料提示的幾個(gè)方面進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，輔以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)；人稱(chēng)主要用第一人稱(chēng)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系；同時(shí)語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。