Question

13．5月11日母親節(jié)那天，你們班同學(xué)用不同的方式為媽媽慶祝節(jié)日．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列所給信息，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀阏J(rèn)為哪一種方式最好，并簡(jiǎn)單說明理由

●有人花很多錢為媽媽買禮物．

●有人自制禮物或賀卡給媽媽．

●有人幫媽媽做家務(wù)．

●你的看法和理由．

注意：1）詞數(shù)：80～100．
2）文中不要提及自己的姓名、學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息．
3）無需寫標(biāo)題，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
參考詞匯：pocket money零花錢．
May 11th was Mothers'Day．My classmates celebrated this special day in different ways．Some of them spent lots of pocket money buying expensive gifts for their mothers，or made cards and gifts by themselves．Some students did as much housework as possible to help their mothers．
All the ways above are OK．Whatever we do，thanksgiving is the most important．Our mothers have given us so much love and care，so we should give them more in return．What's more，working hard and being good kidsare also good ways to make our mothers happy．Let's take action to express our love to our mothers heartedly and faithfully．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇表格作文．內(nèi)容談?wù)劄閶寢寫c祝節(jié)日的不同方式以及自己的看法．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．同學(xué)們慶祝媽媽節(jié)日的不同方式
2．我的看法和理由

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
in different ways 以不同的方式
spend 金錢+doing 花費(fèi)金錢做某事
as …as possible 盡可能的
in return 作為回報(bào)
What's more 更有甚者
take action to do sth 采取行動(dòng)做某事

高分句型：
一、Some students ①did as much housework as possible ②to help their mothers．
①as …as possible盡可能怎么樣的，中間加形容詞/副詞或名詞．
加形容詞/副詞：When he heard the news，he ran as quickly as possible．（當(dāng)他聽到這個(gè)消息時(shí)，他盡快地跑）
加名詞：do as much homework as possible（做盡可能多的作業(yè)），sell as many apples as possible（賣盡可能多的蘋果）；
②動(dòng)詞不定式to help their mothers作為目的狀語．非謂語動(dòng)詞的運(yùn)用．

二、What's more，working hard and being good kids are also good ways to make our mothers happy．
What's more更有甚者，作為插入語，working hard and being good kids 兩個(gè)動(dòng)名詞短語作為主語，謂語用復(fù)數(shù)．

解答 May 11th was Mothers'Day．My classmates celebrated this special day in different ways．Some of them spent lots of pocket money buying expensive gifts for their mothers，or made cards and gifts by themselves．Some students did as much housework as possible to help their mothers．（高分句型）（慶祝節(jié)日的不同方式）
   All the ways above are OK．Whatever we do，thanksgiving is the most important．Our mothers have given us so much love and care，so we should give them more in return．What's more，working hard and being good kids are also  good ways to make our mothers happy．（高分句型）Let's take action to express our love to our mothers heartedly and faithfully．（我的看法和理由）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇所給材料比較詳細(xì)的表格類作文，我們要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，可有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系．