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8．這次考試結(jié)束以后，你將怎樣度過一個有意義的暑假，請用英語寫一篇文章給你自己和小伙伴們一些好的建議，內(nèi)容必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：
①走親訪友，和家人一起共度美好時光．②和好朋友們一起看電影，聽音樂…
③假期我們應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)．④你還有什么別的建議（至少兩條）．
要求：
1．字?jǐn)?shù)80-100，不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名．
3．行文連貫，條理清晰，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范．
4．標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation after the Exam
It is necessary to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam．There are kinds of activities for us to take part in．
                         

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Second，seeing a film，listening to music or hanging out with our friends will be also wonderful．第二，看電影，聽音樂和朋友閑逛將會是非常美妙．動詞短語作主語時，要用其ing形式，hang out with…，和…閑逛．
高分句型二：What's more，we had better review what we have learned in middle school．更重要的是，我們最好復(fù)習(xí)一下我們在中學(xué)學(xué)過的東西．what's more，更重要的，遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，had better do sth．最好做某事，表示建議；review后面接的是一個賓語從句，疑問詞what 提前．
高分句型三：Finally，it is necessary for us to do some housework，which can help our parents a lot．最后，做一些家務(wù)對我們而言是有必要的，它能給我們的父母幫很多忙．（該句是一個非限定性定語從句，which can help our parents a lot 是一個定語來修飾housework．句型It is+adj．for sb．to do sth．做某事是…，句型中It 作形式主語，真正的主語為動詞不定式．）

解答 How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation after the Exam
    It is necessay to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam．There are kinds of activities for us to take part in．
    First，we can visit our friends and relatives or spend happy time with our family．Second，seeing a film，listening to music or hanging out with our friends will be also wonderful．（高分句型一）Third，we should take more exercise to keep healthy．What's more，we had better review what we have learned in middle school．（高分句型二） Finally，it is necessary for us to do some housework，which can help our parents a lot．（高分句型三）（分別按順序列舉可以參加的活動）
   Above all，I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation．（最后作總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評 考生在寫作時需明確寫作要點(diǎn)，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢，考生在平時應(yīng)多注意�？嫉淖魑男问剑�積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯．