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12．有一種節(jié)約叫光盤，有一種公益叫光盤！所謂光盤，就是吃光你盤子中的食物，拒絕浪費(fèi)，珍惜糧食！針對這項行動，并根據(jù)以下提示，請你以"No Wasting On Food"為題寫一篇短文，號召大家參與這項活動．
要點提示：
Reason：
（1）a waste of food，money
（2）Pollute the environment
…
Suggestion：
（1）eat up all your food/clear your plate
（2）leftovers（剩飯菜）…
（3）order less or smaller dishes
注意：（1）短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）語句流暢，書寫規(guī)范；
（3）詞數(shù)80-100詞；
（4）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實人名、地名等信息；
（5）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
No Wasting On Food
Recently，many restaurants around our country have joined the"Clearing Your Plate"campaign（活動） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes．I believe it ismeaningful/necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity．
It is a waste offood and money if we order too much food．Meanwhile，the environment will bepolluted by the wasted food．Also，eating too much is bad for our health．Weshould take action to support the campaign．
First，we shouldeat up all the food in our dishes and plates．Second，we may order less orsmaller dishes in the restaurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home andenjoy them later．
In a word，Ithink it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是提綱類作文．我們利用生活中的細(xì)節(jié)來指導(dǎo)我們來寫作．首先，對這次活動意義就行說明，進(jìn)行總的概括，可以用I believe it is meaningful/necessary/important for us to take anactive part in this activity．來表達(dá)．然后對浪費(fèi)造成的危害進(jìn)行說明，根據(jù)題目的提示及自己的發(fā)揮，如吃太多對我們的健康也是有害的eating too much is bad for our health．來表達(dá)．最后，對反對浪費(fèi)我們應(yīng)該如何做提出建議，可以用first，second third來進(jìn)行分層說明，同時用一句話進(jìn)行全文的總結(jié)In a word，I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．

解答 參考范文：Recently，nearly26 restaurants in Nanjing have joined the"Clearing Your Plate"campaign（活動） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes．
I believe it ismeaningful/necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity．
It is a waste offood and money if we order too much food．Meanwhile，the environment will bepolluted by the wasted food．Also，eating too much is bad for our health．Weshould take action to support the campaign．
First，we shouldeat up all the food in our dishes and plates．Second，we may order less orsmaller dishes in the restaurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home andenjoy them later．
In a word，Ithink it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．

點評 對于此類文章的寫作，學(xué)生在平時的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常用的表達(dá)多個好處的句型．如be good for，benefit，useful等單詞短語．英語的寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對于不會表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會替換，同時注意用平時在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫出新意，寫出文采．