Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（15分）

“誰知盤中餐，粒粒皆辛苦�！比欢�有不少同學(xué)在學(xué)校就餐時(shí)存在不同程度的浪費(fèi)食物的現(xiàn)象。對此請你根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖要點(diǎn)提示，以“Don’t Waste Any More”為題寫一篇英語短文，呼吁大家節(jié)約糧食，防止浪費(fèi)

Don’t Waste Any More

1. Food is important to us

2.Waste much food. For example...

3.Lots of people are short of food in the world, die of hunger

4.Have a good habit

提示： 1. 內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；

3. 詞數(shù)不少于80。文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Don’t Waste Any More!

Food is very important to us. It’s everybody’s duty to save food.________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Don’t Waste Any More!

Food is important to us. It’s everyone’s duty to save food. But at school not everyone can realize this. Many students waste much food. For example, some students buy more food than they need. They leave much on the plate and then pour it into the rubbish can. Some students even throw the food everywhere for fun. Our country is a developing county. In order to make China dream come true, we should save everything as well as the food in our life. What’s more, lots of people are short of food in the world. They live a hard life and many of them, especially some children, die of hunger. We should have a good habit. Let’s take an action part together!

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求以Don’t waste any more為標(biāo)題寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，呼吁大家節(jié)約糧食，防止浪費(fèi)。所給要點(diǎn)比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：亮點(diǎn)一：In order to make China dream come true, we should save everything as well as the food in our life. 為了實(shí)現(xiàn)中國的夢想，我們要節(jié)約一切以及我們生活中的食物。亮點(diǎn)二：What’s more, lots of people are short of food in the world. 更重要的是，世界上許多人缺乏食物。