Question

動(dòng)物是我們?nèi)祟惖呐笥眩瑢?duì)人類來(lái)說(shuō)非常重要。但是現(xiàn)在動(dòng)物越來(lái)越少，野生動(dòng)物更是越來(lái)越少，很多野生動(dòng)物都處于瀕危狀態(tài)。請(qǐng)以“We need to protect wildlife animals”為題，寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)100左右的文章。

要點(diǎn)：1.為什么有些野生動(dòng)物處于危險(xiǎn)之中？

      2.為什么保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物很重要？

      3.作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物？

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction, because the environment that they are living in has changed greatly. For example，with the developmet of cities, the using of insecticide and serious pollution, their living areas have become narrower and narrower. Many of the wild animals, now are confronted with food crisis. At the same time, man is killing off animals just for getting their fur, skin, horns, teeth and meat. In order to protect our resources of ecology，people should realize that the loss of any species is at least the loss of source of knowledge and a source of natural beauty. There fore, measures of the following should be taken pollution standards are made to keep down poisons；killing off certain rare species is prohibited，national parks should be set up as wild life reserves. Only if we human beings take some drastic measures can wild animals be preserved.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的重要性。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱進(jìn)行敘述，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: For example例如；At the same time同時(shí)；kill off消滅，殺滅；in order to為了；only if只有等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更加精彩。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。