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10．現(xiàn)在有些學(xué)生缺乏"感恩"意識(shí)，對(duì)待家人、朋友、老師等很冷漠，而且行為方式和價(jià)值觀(guān)令人擔(dān)憂(yōu)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，以"Learn to express thanks"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿．

學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀	認(rèn)為父母供他們吃好穿好是應(yīng)該的，不知道感恩．
為什么要感恩	一個(gè)人的成長(zhǎng)離不開(kāi)社會(huì)、父母、老師和朋友的幫助．
怎么感恩	…（至少兩點(diǎn)）

要求：
1．演講稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名及能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的信息；
2．詞數(shù)：90單詞左右．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Good morning，boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is"Learn to express thanks"．Nowdays some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school．They think they must be comfortable，but they don't show any sense of"Thanks"．
I don't think it is right．We are lucky in everything．We can have a chance to receive good education because of society，And It's our parents who support us and love us very much．Besides，it is our teachers who teach us much knowledge．Our friends share joy with us and give us courage to overcome many difficulties．
We must learn to express thanks to them．At present，we should be polite to our teachers and parents．If it is possible，we'll try to help others when they are in trouble．As a student，we must study hard in order to make a contribution to our country in the future．a(chǎn)nd only when we succeed in our jobs can we better reward our parents，teachers and so on．
Thanksforyourlistening!
Thanks for your listening!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"Learn to express thanks"為題談?wù)劗?dāng)前缺乏感恩的現(xiàn)狀以及如何感恩父母，老師，朋友．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一、三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1． 背景：認(rèn)為吃好穿好是應(yīng)該的，缺失感恩意識(shí)．
2．學(xué)會(huì)感恩 1）．感謝父母供養(yǎng)（support）自己上學(xué)．
2）．感謝老師教給我們?cè)S多知識(shí)．
3）．感謝朋友給予我們鼓勵(lì)和幫助
3．怎么感恩（至少兩點(diǎn)）
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
share…with sb 與某人分享
be polite to sb 對(duì)某人禮貌
try  to do sth 盡力做某事
in order to 為了…
【高分句型】
1．And It's our parents who support us and love us very much．
who作為關(guān)系代詞的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞parents，關(guān)系詞做從句的主語(yǔ)．
2．①I(mǎi)f it is possible，we'll②try to help others③when they are in trouble．
①if 引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
②try  to do sth 盡力做某事
③when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，in trouble 處于困境
3．As a student，we must study hard①in order to make a contribution to our country in the future．a(chǎn)nd ②only when we succeed in our jobs can we better reward our parents，teachers and so on．
①in order to 為了…做目的狀語(yǔ)．
②only+從句，放句首引起倒裝．

解答 Good morning，boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is"Learn to express thanks"． Nowdays some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school．They think they must be comfortable，but they don't show any sense of"Thanks"．（認(rèn)為吃好穿好是應(yīng)該的，缺失感恩意識(shí)）
I don't think it is right．We are lucky in everything．We can have a chance to receive good education because of society，And It's our parents who support us and love us very much．【高分句型】（感謝父母供養(yǎng)自己上學(xué)．）Besides，it is our teachers who teach us much knowledge．（感謝老師教給我們?cè)S多知識(shí)）Our friends share joy with us and give us courage to overcome many difficulties．（感謝朋友給予我們鼓勵(lì)和幫助）
We must learn to express thanks to them．At present，we should be polite to our teachers and parents．If it is possible，we'll try to help others when they are in trouble．【高分句型】As a student，we must study hard in order to make a contribution to our country in the future．a(chǎn)nd only when we succeed in our jobs can we better reward our parents，teachers and so on．【高分句型】（怎么感恩）
Thanks for your listening!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇利用表格的給材料作文．本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)：當(dāng)前缺乏感恩的現(xiàn)狀，如何感恩父母，老師，朋友．對(duì)未來(lái)的打算．根據(jù)內(nèi)容我們可以分三個(gè)段落分去寫(xiě)．本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，寫(xiě)作中注意時(shí)態(tài)及時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題．寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞及短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．