Question

閱讀信息表，如果你是Li Fang的朋友， 寫(xiě)一段關(guān)于你的朋友Li Fang 的短文，60詞左右，首句已給出。

Name：Li Fang           Age:13             Birthplace(出生地) ：Jiaxing

School: No.1 Middle School          Class:  One        Grade:  Seven

Teacher: Miss Yang                         Best friend: Daming

Favourite season:  Autumn                  Favourite sport: Football

Father: Manager\hotel                      Mother: Nurse \ hospital

 

This is my friend, her name is Li Fang.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

She is a 13- year- old girl who was born in Jiaxing . She is in Class one Grade seven in No.1 Middle School. She is the top student in her class and her teacher and classmates like her. Her teacher is Miss Yang. Her best friend is Daming . Autumn is Li Fang’s favourite season and playing football is her favourite sport. Li Fang’s father is a manager in a hotel and her mother is a nurse in a hospital.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容可知本文要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第三人稱(chēng)，寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如定語(yǔ)從句She is a 13- year- old girl who was born in Jiaxing.和動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)playing football is her favourite sport.等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。