分析 這是一篇提綱作文.內(nèi)容為以"Less pressure,better life"為主題,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法.時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時及一般過去時.人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱.
寫作思路:首先考生需要根據(jù)題干信息及題目確定寫作主題圍繞當今學(xué)生的壓力展開,其次需仔細分析題干中所給要點,組詞成句,描述同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力,自己的壓力及緩解辦法.
寫作要點包括:1.同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么;2.我的壓力是什么;3.我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的.
常用到的重點短語:
under too much pressure承受太多的壓力
get on well with與…相處的好
worry about擔心,擔憂
send sb.to 把某人送到…
need time to do需要時間做…
【重點句型】
Some students can't①get along well with their classmates,②while others may ③be worried about their exams.
①get along well with與…相處的好
②while 然而,表對比
③be worried about 擔心…
So I think ①②it is necessary to have a conversation with parents ③to solve the problem.
①think后加上省略了that的賓語從句、
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的,it是形式主語,動詞不定式做真正主語.
③動詞不定式做目的狀語.
解答 Less pressure,better life
Hello,boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.
Some students can't get on well with their classmates,while others may worry about their exams.【同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么】
I'm always under pressure,too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of after-school classes at weekends.【分述觀點:描述自身的壓力】
Last Monday evening,I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.【分述觀點:自身壓力的解決辦法】So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.【總說,表達觀點】
That's all.Thank you!
點評 這是一篇提綱類作文,我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次.特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化.
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