Question

7．在初中即將畢業(yè)之際，請你以張明的名義給英國筆友Brian寫一封感謝信，要點提示如下：

三年前	你來到新的班級，沒有朋友，感到孤獨
三年中	Brian多次給你寫信，他在信中： 鼓勵你多交朋友； 告訴你學(xué)好英語的方法； 和你分享快樂； 你變得…
近年來天津發(fā)生很大變化，你邀請他來天津游玩

參考詞匯：分享快樂 share happiness
要求：
（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個
（2）信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)
（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
Dear Brian，
  How time flies!We have been friends for three years．I'm writing to thank you for your help!
  Three years ago，I came to a new class，and I had no friends，so I felt lonely．You wrote to me many times．In your letter，you encouraged me to make more friends and told me how to learn English well．During these three years，you shared happiness with me．And I became happy．In recent years，great changes have happened in Tianjin．Could you come and go on vacation in Tianjin？
  Hope to see you soon!
                                                                            Yours，
                                                                         Zhang Ming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文，給自己的好友寫一封信，結(jié)合所給材料，可知時態(tài)要以一般過去時態(tài)為主，人稱為第一、第二人稱，寫作要點要包括：1．三年前的境況．2．三年中所給的幫助．3．提出邀請．

解答 Dear Brian，
    How time flies!We have been friends for three years．I'm writing to thank you for your help!
    Three years ago，I came to a new class，and I had no friends，so I felt lonely．You wrote to me many times．In your letter，you encouraged me to make more friends and told me how to learn English well．During these three years，you shared happiness with me．And I became happy．In recent years，great changes have happened in Tianjin．Could you come and go on vacation in Tianjin？
    Hope to see you soon!
Yours，
Zhang Ming

點評 本文主要考查寫作時要注意，時態(tài)用一般過去時，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I came to…；you encouraged me to…；you shared…；I became…及Could you come…？等句式的應(yīng)用．寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用．寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系．