Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

某英語報(bào)開展“How to Deal with the Exam Stress”征文比賽，請你根據(jù)表格中提示的內(nèi)容，簡要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇短文

適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫?/span>	積極思考，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí) 及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)，防止遺忘
過重的壓力	無法入睡，非常疲倦 害怕考試，導(dǎo)致失敗
應(yīng)對的措施	合理計(jì)劃，準(zhǔn)備充分 ---（至少兩條）

注意：1、不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名；

2、詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to use.

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. Besides, it can remind us to go over our lessons in time to remember them. So we can pass the exams easily.

However, if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired. We may be afraid of the exams too much and fail in the end.

In my opinion, to deal with stress, we’d better plan and prepare well. We should also form some good habits, such as enough exercise and healthy diets. Then we will feel relaxed and do well in the exams.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹如何解決考試帶來的壓力。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：A little bit of stress can be...；it can remind us to...；if we have....及we’d better ...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要用題目要求的提綱內(nèi)容。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭考試帶來的壓力的好處，接下來介紹考試壓力的不利之處，最后指出我們解決考試壓力。此處用了remind us to，feel too tired，too heavy stress，in the end，form some good habits, do well in等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。