Question

書面表達(dá)（本題共10分）
假如你是李華，請(qǐng)圍繞以下幾個(gè)方面給你的筆友Tom寫封信，談?wù)勀闫谀┛荚嚭蠹倨诘拇蛩恪?nbsp;（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出）
1. 經(jīng)過(guò)繁忙的復(fù)習(xí)、考試后，想在假期中休息一下；做自己喜歡做的事……
2. 多與父母交流，幫助做家務(wù)。
3. 參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐（如：幫助老人、殘疾人(disabled)等），增加對(duì)社會(huì)的了解。  
注意：1. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名。2. 字?jǐn)?shù)：80詞左右(已給出的句子不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
DearTom,
How are yougettingonthesedays?I’vejust finishedmyfinalexam.          
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                                
                                                                              
                                                                               
Best wishes!
Yours,
LiHua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,  
How are you getting on these days? I’ve just finished my final exam. After working hard for a long time, I really want to have a good rest during the winter vacation. First, I’m going to watch some interesting movies and read some good books. Then, it’s time to communicate with my parents. I wish to share my happiness and sadness with them. Besides, I plan to help do some housework. At last, I hope to be a volunteer, helping the old and disabled as much as possible. In this way, I can know about the world better.
By the way, how will you spend your vacation?
Best wishes!

試題分析：對(duì)于書信的文體，要注意與對(duì)方的互動(dòng)就行進(jìn)行面對(duì)面對(duì)話一樣，所以結(jié)尾可以問(wèn)問(wèn)他是如何安排的。本文中首先對(duì)考試后自己想休息一下進(jìn)行總的描寫，然后分三到四點(diǎn)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行講述我要做些什么，對(duì)最后一點(diǎn)做法的意義進(jìn)行一下說(shuō)明，這樣體現(xiàn)出詳略得當(dāng)，最后詢問(wèn)他會(huì)如何安排，顯得親切得體。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文難度不大，寫作條理性要把握好，對(duì)于要做的幾件事情，寫的過(guò)程中通過(guò)變換句式和用詞上來(lái)提高語(yǔ)言的美度。在一件事情寫完后要用上表關(guān)系的連接詞，或平時(shí)積累的各類表遞進(jìn)、并列的連詞來(lái)是文章富于活力。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中要多去背誦范文，對(duì)表達(dá)好的句子，短語(yǔ)要進(jìn)行積累，并默寫，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無(wú)患。