Question

【題目】書面表達 （共1題， 滿分15分）

假如你是Li Ming，你和朋友一起討論各自去過的地方以及做過的一些活動。請根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫一篇短文介紹你和你朋友的相關情況， 請適當增加細節(jié)內容。

Name	Activity	Feeling
Li Ming	travel to Beijing, live in another city, try seafood	The seafood was delicious. …
Tony	eat a Western meal, enter a dancing competition, watch a football match	The football match was exciting. …
Lily	travel alone, cook dinner for the family, visit the museum	Cooking is difficult. …

要求：（1）要點齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚；

（2）可適當發(fā)揮， 70詞左右（不包括已經(jīng)給出的內容）。

My friends and I talk about the places we have visited and the things we have done. __________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My friends and I talk about the places we have visited and things we have done. I traveled to Beijing last summer with my friends. I tried seafood. I think it was delicious. This is the first time I have lived in another city. My friend Tony ate a Western meal. He also entered a dancing competition. Last week he watched a football match with his friends. He felt the match was exciting. Lily traveled alone. Though cooking is difficult, she cooks dinner for the family. She visited the museum last Sunday. She felt it was very interesting.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文讓我們以李明的身份和朋友們一起討論自己參觀過的地方和做過的事情。題目中給出了我們三個人的信息，你自己、Tony和Lily，表格中有他們曾做過的事情以及他們的感受，我們需要用正確的英語將這些內容表達出來。通過分析可知，這篇短文我們應主要使用一般過去時態(tài)，因此我們要特別注意每句話中謂語動詞的形式，都要去過去式，特別是要注意不規(guī)則動詞過去式的變化。根據(jù)表達的需要，我們可以增加一些內容，但這些內容要符合文章整體表達的需要。寫作中除注意語言的準確之外，還要注意使用一些連詞或句型，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

寫作亮點：這是一篇不錯的作文，短文中作者介紹了自己曾去過的地方和做過的事情，還介紹了自己的兩個朋友Tony和Lily他們的情況。短文主要分成三個部分，自己、Tony和Lily，先介紹了曾去過的地方和做過的事情，然后還提到了他們的感受。短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，尤其是注意了動詞形式的變化，符合英語的表達規(guī)范。另外作者還使用了一些較好的句型，這些好的句型有：This is the first time I have lived in another city.、Last week he watched a football match with his friends、Though cooking is difficult, she cooks dinner for the family等。