Question

【題目】寫作（計(jì)20分）

中學(xué)生普遍面臨著很多煩惱，請(qǐng)用英語描述下面表格中列出的問題，并提出自己的建議。

煩惱1	整天有做不完的作業(yè)，經(jīng)常熬夜學(xué)習(xí)，無暇顧及個(gè)人愛好；
煩惱2	父母太忙，沒有時(shí)間陪自己；
煩惱3	幾乎沒有親密的朋友可以交流，經(jīng)常感到孤獨(dú)；
煩惱4	對(duì)自己的體重不滿意，不知如何改變；
建議	… …

要求：1、條理清楚，語句通順；

2、80詞左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Now, many middle school students face some problems.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Now， many middle school students face some problems.

Many students have too much homework to do. To finish it， they have to stay up late. So they often feel tired and have no spare time for their hobbies. Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them and they don't have any close friends to talk to. I think they can talk to their parents and teachers about their problems and ask them for help.

Some other students aren't happy with their weight. To lose weight and keep fit， they need to do more exercise and eat healthy food.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求學(xué)生談?wù)?/span>中學(xué)生普遍面臨著很多煩惱。首先，審題時(shí)，應(yīng)是當(dāng)?shù)剡M(jìn)行謀篇布局。根據(jù)要求可分為兩部分進(jìn)行寫作：1. 中學(xué)生普遍面臨著的很多煩惱。2. 你給出的建議。然后，應(yīng)利用規(guī)范的語言，流暢的語句，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，對(duì)存在問題及采用辦法進(jìn)行詳細(xì)描述。最后簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)。另外，還應(yīng)盡可能地使用一些固定句型及短語，以提高文章的得分等級(jí)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文行文流暢，語言規(guī)范。還使用了一些固定句型及短語，為文章增色不少。如too much，stay up late等等。