Question

【題目】寫作

根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

提示：1．旅游是一種非常好的活動(dòng)�？尚蕾p自然美景，游覽旅游勝地，可交友，放松心情…

2．旅游有時(shí)很麻煩。天氣多變，花很多錢，交通擁堵，人太多…

3．旅游時(shí)應(yīng)做好充分準(zhǔn)備。了解天氣情況， 和朋友家人在一起便于相互照顧，注意安全。

要求：1. 內(nèi)容須包括以上提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 行文流暢，語言通順。

Traveling

Traveling is a very good activity. When you get tired of your work or study，

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Answer 1

【答案】

Traveling

Traveling is a very good activity. When you get tired of your work or study， and when you have free time， you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature or other cities. You can take in fresh air， meet different people and make friends with them. It’s good for your health to do so.

But at times， traveling is not an enjoyable thing. For example， the weather can be changeable. There may be rain when you travel. You may catch a cold or be ill while traveling. The worst thing is that the thieves may steal your money. All these may happen to a tourist.

When you go on a trip， you must get everything ready. Firstly， you must have clear information about the weather .Secondly， ask a friend to go with you so that you can help each other. Thirdly， you must be careful everywhere and not to cause accidents. If you do this， you will surely enjoy your travel.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文語句流暢，段落清晰，是一篇較好的習(xí)作。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。