Question

19．假如你叫Bill，昨天游泳后患了感冒，今天早上覺(jué)得頭疼．媽媽給你量了體溫后，發(fā)現(xiàn)你發(fā)燒，便帶你去看醫(yī)生．醫(yī)生說(shuō)你需要臥床休息兩天，特向老師請(qǐng)假．請(qǐng)給老師寫一張請(qǐng)假條．
                                                             June 12th，2014
Dear Mrs．White，
I'm sorry to tell you thatIcan't go toschool today．
I've caught a cold because I swam yesterday．
This morning I had a headache．After taking my temperature，my mother found that I had a high fever．Immediately she took me to see a doctor，who advised me to stay in bed for 2 days．Now I am writing to you to ask for 2 days'sick leave．
With best wishes．
                                                            Your student，
                                                                    Bill．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇提綱作文，給老師寫一張請(qǐng)假條，寫作內(nèi)容包括：1．請(qǐng)假原因，描寫癥狀．2．醫(yī)生的結(jié)論．3．請(qǐng)假幾天．內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)單，描述看醫(yī)生的經(jīng)過(guò)應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，描述癥狀時(shí)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換．

解答 June 12th，2014
Dear Mrs．White，
    I'm sorry to tell you that I can't go to school today．I've caught a cold because I swam yesterday．
    This morning I had a headache．After taking my temperature，my mother found that I had a high fever．Immediately she took me to see a doctor，who advised me to stay in bed for 2 days．Now I am writing to you to ask for 2 days'sick leave．
    With best wishes．
                                                                         Your student，
                                                                             Bill

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇應(yīng)用文，寫作時(shí)要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，同時(shí)這是寫給老師的請(qǐng)假條，應(yīng)該注意語(yǔ)氣．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，如Could you please？或Will you please？等征求允許的句子，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．