Question

【題目】作文。

談?wù)勀壳扒嗌倌暝诩彝ズ蛯W(xué)習(xí)生活中存在的問題或壓力，以及如何去解決問題、排解壓力，根據(jù)要求寫一篇70詞左右的短文：

要求：從以下提示中任意選取3個(gè)方面談?wù)劊▽W(xué)業(yè)、功課、課外學(xué)習(xí)、友誼、父母的關(guān)系及期盼等）導(dǎo)致睡眠、心情、脾氣等方面的問題，每方面至少提出一條建議。

Answer 1

【答案】

Everyone has stress,including me. My stress comes from many parts in my life. My study bring me too much stress.My parents said if I don't study well,I won't have a good future. So I have to do much homework and have many after-class classes.They may expect me to be the best in the world. I feel so terrible. I can't sleep well and worry about everything. I get a bad temper.Now I think of some ideas to deal with stress.First, I think I should talk to someone about my problem. Second,I should take exercise to relax myself. Third, when I'm stressed, I can eat something or listen to music to calm down.

【解析】

試題分析：首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要從三個(gè)部分闡述，壓力，壓力的影響以及如何解決壓力。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，三個(gè)部分內(nèi)容銜接自然，清晰簡(jiǎn)明地表達(dá)了自己的壓力是什么，給自己帶來(lái)的影響和如何解決壓力的三個(gè)看法。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、豐富、流暢。注意了上下文銜接詞的使用，表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)層次分明。結(jié)合書本所學(xué)內(nèi)容，運(yùn)用書本所學(xué)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)技能很好完成了寫作任務(wù)。