【題目】書面表達(dá):
假如你有一個外國筆友,你準(zhǔn)備向他介紹你最好的朋友— 李陽。李陽是個很聰明的學(xué)生,住在南京, 但他有一些不好的習(xí)慣。請你根據(jù)下面表格提供的信息,用英文寫一篇短文,并針對他存在的一些問題提出合理的建議。
Name | Li Yang |
Class | Class 10, Grade 7 |
Looks | big eyes、short and fat,glasses |
Likes | play computer games; watch TV; hamburgers; cola |
Dislikes | swim; run; vegetables |
Suggestions | ◆…… ◆…… |
具體要求:
1. 不少于80詞,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);
2. 語句通順,意思連貫,條理清楚,字跡工整;
3. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點,不要逐字翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Li Yang is my best friend.
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【答案】
(One possible version)
Lang Yang is my best friend. He is a clever student. He lives in Dafeng. He is in Class Ten , Grade Seven. He is short and fat. He has big eyes and wears a pair of glasses.
He likes playing computer games and watching TV, he watches TV for three hours every day. he likes having hamburgers and coke.
He doesn’t like swimming or running, he doesn’t love eating vegetables.
I think he should do more exercise and eat more vegetables. He must stop playing computer games. If he does this, he will be healthier!
【解析】
試題分析:本篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一篇人物介紹的文章,主人公是李陽:李陽是個很聰明的學(xué)生,住在南京, 但他有一些不好的習(xí)慣。首先,要認(rèn)真審題,掌握來信中的信息,需要回答的問題。然后整體把握寫作的大致方向,謀篇布局。結(jié)合表格中的以下要點:姓名,班級,外貌,喜好,喜惡,以及作者對他的建議,可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,補充細(xì)節(jié)。寫作中注意上下文的過度,符合邏輯關(guān)系。
寫作亮點:本文行文流暢,語言規(guī)范。各種短語句型表達(dá)的使用非常準(zhǔn)確,固定短語“playing computer games and watching TV,do more exercise and eat more vegetables”以及復(fù)合句“If he does this, he will be healthier!”和比較級的使用,豐富了文章的內(nèi)容,為文章增色不少。
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