Question

【題目】書面表達。

近日，學(xué)校英語俱樂部即將舉辦名為“My favourite star”的英文寫作比賽。假設(shè)你是郎平的粉絲，請你根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇詞數(shù)80左右的英語短文。

內(nèi)容要點:1.郎平，你的偶像，五十幾歲，孩童時就癡迷于打排球;

2.過去在隊里擔(dān)任主力(play the lead role)，參加過很多比賽;

3.因其出色的工作，中國隊贏得很多獎;她是中國人的驕傲;

4.嚴(yán)肅認(rèn)真，總致力于高標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，取得了很多成績;

5.你認(rèn)為……(發(fā)揮2―3句)。

My favourite star

Lang Ping is the chief coach of the Chinese National Women's Volleyball Team.

Answer 1

【答案】My favourite star

Lang Ping is the chief coach of the Chinese National Women's Volleyball Team. She is

my hero. She is in her fifties. As a child, she was crazy about playing volleyball. She used to

play the lead role in her team. Site took part in many competitions. Because of her excellent

work, the Chinese team has won many awards. We Chinese people are proud of her. She is

serious and always works to high standards. She has got many achievements. I think she

has devoted herself/all her life to sports. I admire her most. We should learn from her and

work hard.

【解析】

這是一篇提綱式的材料作文，要求以“My favourite star”為標(biāo)題，介紹排球明星郎平，屬于人物介紹。人稱為第三人稱，時態(tài)主要有一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意主謂一致。在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達清楚的要點和細(xì)節(jié)。用到的詞組或短語有：in one’s fifties，be crazy about doing sth.，used to do，play the lead role，take part in，be proud of devote oneself to，learn from等。

高分句型一：She ①used to ②play the lead role in her team.她過去曾經(jīng)在隊中擔(dān)任主力。

①used to do sth過去常常做某事。②play the lead role in 在…里面是主力或扮演主要角色。

高分句型二：I think①she has②devoted herself/all her life to sports.我認(rèn)為她已經(jīng)把自己的一生都投入到了體育運動中去了。①I think 后引導(dǎo)賓語從句，引導(dǎo)詞that被省略。②devote oneself/all one's life to sth固定短語，后可跟名詞，代詞或動名詞，指“把自己或一生都奉獻給……”。