Question

【題目】書面表達。

( 地震幸存者身心都受到了重創(chuàng)，急需社會的幫助。請你寫一封80詞左右的倡議信，呼吁大家為地震幸存者獻出愛心，信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。)

提示：1. 一些地震幸存者受傷嚴重，急需盡快手術，但費用高昂；

2. 一些地震幸存者失去了親人，感到孤獨，獨自生活對他們來說很困難；

3. 我們可以捐出我們的零花錢，也可以擔當醫(yī)院的志愿者；

4. 應該多去拜訪他們讓他們感覺溫暖，我們應該人人伸出援助之手，人多力量大。

Dear all,

Earthquake survivors need our help!

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Thanks a lot for your help!

Sun Yang

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear all,

Earthquake survivors need our help!

Some earthquake survivors were badly hurt in the earthquake. They need operations as soon as possible,but the operations cost a lot. Some survivors lost their family members. They feel lonely. It's hard for them to live alone. We can donate our pocket money and we can also work as volunteers in the hospital. We should visit them more often to make them feel warm. All of us should give a helping hand. Many hands make light work.

Thanks a lot for your help!

Sun Yang

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