Question

【題目】書面表達。（本部分10分）。

假如你是David。你的表兄參軍三年了，由于工作原因一直沒能回家探親，他很想知道這幾年家鄉(xiāng)的變化。請你給他寫封信，告訴他家鄉(xiāng)最近幾年的發(fā)展和變化情況。

提示：1.下表列舉的是你家鄉(xiāng)近幾年最有代表性的變化

2. 要包含表格內(nèi)所有的信息,可以適當增加信息。

3. 可以參考第一部分的句子展開描寫。

4. 要條理清晰，書寫整潔，不少于60詞。

	Changes	Time
people’s lives	be richer and richer	these days
new buildings	appear	already
our village	build a new road	last year
government	build three new schools send teachers from cities to help	since you left home
government	build a large hospital	next year

Dear brother ,

I haven't written to you for a long time, and how is everything going with you? Our hometown have changed a lot.

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Yours

David

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear brother ,

I haven't written to you for a long time, and how is everything going with you? Our hometown has changed a lot. Our lives have been richer and richer these days. Many new buildings have appeared already. Our village

built a new road last year and our government has built three new schools and sent teachers from cities to help teach since you left home. And our government will build a large hospital in our hometown next year.

Yours

David

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求按表格提示給哥哥寫信，介紹家鄉(xiāng)近年來所發(fā)生的變化，要求從人們的生活、新的建筑物、我們村莊、政府等方面進行寫作。要盡量包含表格所提示的信息，并適當展開表達。描述已經(jīng)發(fā)生的變化，用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，描述過去所做的事，用一般過去時態(tài)，寫將要做的事用一般將來時態(tài)，時態(tài)變化較多，要注意分析，準確把握。短文可以主要用第一人稱形式。

寫作亮點：短文按照提示要求，介紹了家鄉(xiāng)近年來發(fā)生的變化，包含了表格所提示的所有信息，層次清楚，重點突出。短文寫作的最大亮點就是時態(tài)的準確使用：短文用了現(xiàn)在完成時，表示政府已經(jīng)做的事情，用了一般過去時描述去年所做的事，用了一般將來時介紹明年要做的事，用了現(xiàn)在完成進行時態(tài)描述近年來一直在發(fā)生的變化。