Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是劉娜，你的美國筆友Maria來信想了解你的家規(guī)及個人愛好，請你根據以下提示回一封信。

家規(guī)：1.幫父母干家務；2.每天有好多作業(yè)要完成，沒時間看故事書；3.晚上9:30之前要上床睡覺。

愛好：1.喜歡運動參加了學校的排球俱樂部；2.周末經常和朋友去看電影。

要求：1.回信應包括所有提示信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.條理清楚，語意連貫；

3.50詞左右。開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Maria,

I’m glad to hear from you.

What about you?

Yours,

Liu Na

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Maria,

I’m glad to hear from you. I feel tired because there are too many rules in my family. I must help parents do housework every day. I have so much homework to do and I have no time to read story books. What’s worse, I have to be in bed by 9:30 in the evening. I never have any fun on school days.

But on weekends, it’s very relaxing. I like sports, so I am in our school’s volleyball club. I often go to the movies with my friends. I love my weekends.

What about you?

Yours,

Liu Na

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一封回信，要符合書信的格式，因為這是給Jim一封回信，介紹一下自己家的家規(guī)和自己對家規(guī)的看法，因此人稱為第一人稱。同時要注意主謂一致及動詞的時態(tài)。最后要寫出對家規(guī)的看法。

寫作亮點：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。使用了一些短語和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如: I have so much homework to do and I have no time to read story books. I never have any fun on school days.等，What’s worse, But，What about you?的運用，使文章非常順暢，思路清晰。