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4．目前，學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重，請(qǐng)圍繞以下要點(diǎn)談?wù)勂渲性�因以及個(gè)人建議．80詞左右．
一、原因：1．考試太多；  2．自身勤奮不夠；  3．把大量時(shí)間用在上網(wǎng)和玩游戲上；4．為了騙取家長和老師高興．
二、你的看法與建議．
   At present，a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit----cheating in examinations．There are four main reasons．First，schools have given students too many exams，some of which are too difficult．Second，some
students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons．Third，they waste a lot of time playing games or
surfing the Internet．So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams．Finally，students have to do so to make their
teachers and parents happy．
In my opinion，cheating in exams does great harm to our study．We students should be honest and diligent，and only in this way
can we improve our study and make progress．Besides，our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for
ourselves．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇議論文，談?wù)勛约簩?duì)于學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象的看法．通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．
寫作思路及要點(diǎn)：本文的要點(diǎn)主要包括：1．造成作弊的原因：（考試太多；自身勤奮不夠；把大量時(shí)間用在上網(wǎng)和玩游戲上；為了騙取家長和老師高興）
2．你的看法與建議．本題所給材料較為詳細(xì)，寫作中注意把學(xué)生作弊的原因表達(dá)清楚，并提出自己的建議．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)注意使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞，注意賓語從句的應(yīng)用．
重點(diǎn)句型及短語：
Schools have given students too many exams．學(xué)校里的考試太多．
Some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons． 一些學(xué)生不努力，學(xué)習(xí)不刻苦．
They waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet． 他們在玩游戲或網(wǎng)上花費(fèi)太多的時(shí)間．
In my opinion，cheating in exams does great harm to our study． 在我看來，考試作弊對(duì)我們的學(xué)習(xí)有很大的傷害．
Our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves．我們的老師應(yīng)該讓我們少考點(diǎn)試，多給我們時(shí)間自主學(xué)習(xí)．
have enough time to do sth．有足夠的時(shí)間做某事

解答 At present，a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations．＜總起，引出話題＞
There are four main reasons．＜總說，有四種原因＞First，schools have given students too many exams，some of which are too
difficult．Second，some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons．Third，they waste a lot of
time playing games or surfing the Internet．So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams．Finally，students have to
do so to make their teachers and parents happy．＜分開說明，四種原因＞
   In my opinion，cheating in exams does great harm to our study．＜表明觀點(diǎn)＞W(wǎng)e students should be honest and diligent，and
only in this way can we improve our study and make progress．＜學(xué)生層面，怎么做＞Besides，our teachers should offer us fewer
exams and more time to study for ourselves．＜給老師的建議＞

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇提綱作文，是一篇針對(duì)目前學(xué)生中普遍存在的現(xiàn)象的議論文．在寫這篇作文時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會(huì)寫出滿意的文章來．