Question

【題目】我們生活學習在美麗的甘肅。假設你所在的學校正在組織一個“讓世界了解甘肅、讓甘肅走向世界＂的活動，請根據(jù)以下思維導圖的提示，以" The Introduction of Gansu Province"為題，寫一篇介紹甘肅的英語短文。

要求:1.文中需包含思維導圖中的主要內容;

2.句子及篇章結構準確、連貫，書寫規(guī)范;

3.可做適量拓展;

4.詞數(shù):80詞左右。(標題需抄寫在答題卡對應作答區(qū)域，不計入總詞數(shù))

Answer 1

【答案】例文

The Introduction of Gansu Province

Gansu Province lies in the northwest of China. It covers an area of 425,900 square kilometers.There are 26 million people living there. Lanzhou is the capital city of Gansu Province. The weather in Gansu is different from place to place and the temperature is usually quite different from day to night. If you want to go travelling in Gansu, May to October is the best time. Mogao Grotto which is the world famous art palace and Jiayuguan Pass, the western end of the Great Wall, are two of the must-see places of interest in Gansu.

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，介紹甘肅省。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如lie in, there be, the capital city of, be different from, end of, places of interest以及which引導的定語從句，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。