Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你所居住的城市環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重，請根據(jù)提示寫篇短文說明污染原因，并呼吁人們愛護(hù)環(huán)境，保護(hù)地球。

提示：

1.污染原因:工廠燃燒東西制造能量；人們大量砍伐樹木；公路上汽車數(shù)量的增多，污染空氣；人們亂扔垃圾，污染土地。

2.呼吁保護(hù)環(huán)境：1. 多植樹；2. 停止亂扔垃圾；3. 自己補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)保護(hù)環(huán)境的方法

要求：

1. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 正確運(yùn)用人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語法等。

3. 詞數(shù)要求：70個(gè)左右。

4. 短文的開頭已給出，不算入總詞數(shù)。

Protect the Earth

The environment in my city is becoming worse.

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Answer 1

【答案】Protect the Earth

The environment in my city is becoming worse. Because some factories are burning things to make energy and cut down trees that many animals are disappearing. Besides, there are many cars today, which will pollute the air badly. What's more, people often throw away a lot of rubbish every day. This pollutes the land.

We must stop polluting our earth and try our best to protect it. First, plant more trees to clean the air. Second, people shouldn’t burn things to make energy because this pollutes the air. Third, Don’t throw away a lot of rubbish every day cause it pollutes the land. Finally, don’t put waste into the rivers and seas cause it can pollute the water.

Earth is our mother. Without earth, without life. So we should try our best to protect our it.

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，說明你所居住的城市環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重的原因并呼吁人們愛護(hù)環(huán)境、保護(hù)地球。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如because, besides, what’s more, throw away, try one’s best do do, first, second, third, last以及which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。