Question

14．你一定有出去游玩的經(jīng)歷吧，請你以"A trip to…"為題，寫一篇游記．要求：
①將題目補(bǔ)充完整； ②包括下列要點(diǎn)：Where did you go？When did you start your trip？Who did you go with？How did you get there？What activities did you do there？How did you feel about the trip？③篇幅在80詞左右．
A trip to                  

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：We played games first，and then we went boating on the lake．我們先玩游戲，然后在湖上劃船．play game玩游戲．go boating去劃船．在湖上用介詞on．
句型二：At noon，we had lunch in the restaurant near the park．中午，我們在公園附近的餐館吃午飯．a(chǎn)t noon在中午，had lunch吃午飯，have的過去式是had．in the restaurant在餐館里．near the park在公園附近．

解答 A trip to Binhai City
last Sunday，（時間）I finished my homework．I was free．My parents took me to Binhai Park．（地點(diǎn)） We went there by bus（交通工具）．On the road，I was excited．Half an hour later，we got there．I got off the bus quickly．We played games first，and then we went boating on the lake．【高分句型一】We took many photos there．We had a great time（玩得開心）．At noon，we had lunch in the restaurant near the park【高分句型二】．After lunch，（吃飯）we went shopping in the street（購物）．My parents bought many snacks and books for me．At about 6 o'clock，we took a bus home．（回家）

點(diǎn)評 寫作時要明確要點(diǎn)，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢，語法正確，結(jié)合要求，注意作文題材，不要寫跑題．日常積累一些短語和詞句．