Question

【題目】 書面表達 （滿分10分）

當2015年4月25日（星期六）下午兩點左右尼泊爾（Nepal）大地震發(fā)生時，你和家人正在干什么？假如讓你去災區(qū)當志愿者，你愿意干些什么？

請你寫一篇80 詞左右的短文。

提示詞：災區(qū) disaster area 地震 earthquake

Answer 1

【答案】

At 2 o’clock,on the afternoon of April 25th ,2015,an earth happened in Nepal.When the earth happened,we were sleeping.It's reported that more than 8,000 people died in the Nepal earthquake. What's more, millions of people there have become homeless. And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. To help people in Nepal, I raised money and gave it to charity. I also gave away books and clothes, because I think although this earthquake made a lot of children homeless, they can’t give up studying. So the book I sent can help them continue learning knowledge. Now, I’m going to do more things for Nepal people. I want to write some letters to Nepal students and tell them how brave they are to encourage them keep being alive. I believe no Valentine's love of natural disasters. In a battle to save the lives of all people, the victory will come after a disaster test of the Chinese nation.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文是命題作文，在寫作時要構思好文章的結構，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結構清晰完整，表達準確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如I want to write some letters to Nepal students and tell them how brave they

are to encourage them keep being alive. I believe no Valentine's love of natural disasters. In a battle to save the lives of all people, the victory will come after a disaster test of the Chinese nation.

等等。