Question

【題目】作文。

學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)報(bào)就“爭(zhēng)做校園環(huán)保小衛(wèi)士”話題征文，請(qǐng)你投稿。

談?wù)勆�活中你的具體做法、環(huán)境保護(hù)的重大意義以及你的環(huán)保倡議。

要求：1. 詞數(shù)80--100詞；

2. 短文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名和校名等信息；

3. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞語(yǔ)： collect bottles turn off duty make a real difference

Good environment is important for everyone.

Answer 1

【答案】

Good environment is important for everyone. To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor. Besides, I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.

As students, I think it’s our duty to protect the environment of our school. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And it’s also a good idea to take part in recycling programs.

I hope everyone will care about the environment. I believe we can make our school more and more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：作文要圍繞要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作：具體做法，感受，建議。要符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確，要點(diǎn)齊全。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性.注意提示語(yǔ) collect bottles turn off duty make a real difference的運(yùn)用。注意作文的升華，提出環(huán)保的意義。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor. Besides,I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.1.具體做法最好寫(xiě)上三點(diǎn)，三點(diǎn)之間要有過(guò)渡。過(guò)渡不要頻繁使用 first，second，third。這篇文章處理的很好，to help with it, Besides, and。2. 注意從句的運(yùn)用，比如時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句等。