Question

許多學習生活中的煩惱都會使人產(chǎn)生壓力，為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學們中存在的心理壓力問題，你們班特意開展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”為主題的英語演講比賽，請你準備發(fā)言稿，談談你的一些緩解壓力的好辦法，與同學分享，內(nèi)容包括：

●同學們中普遍存在的壓力是什么；

●我的壓力是什么；

●我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。

注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；

      2. 詞數(shù)80~100詞；

      3. 短文的開頭、結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

      4. 將答案寫在相應的位置上。

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. __________________________________________________________

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That’s all. Thank you!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

                            Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.

Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。應注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的數(shù)量和準確性及上下文的連貫性。同時針對個人的真實情況與短文的要求進行恰當?shù)氖潞�，更能加強作品的可讀性。

【亮點說明】本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；應用了較豐富的語法結構和詞匯；用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，沒有或基本沒有語言錯誤；書寫工整；字數(shù)符合要求。完全達到了預期的寫作目的。

考點：提綱作文。