Question

【題目】【2014年內(nèi)蒙古通遼市中考】

現(xiàn)在養(yǎng)寵物狗已成為很多人生活中的一部分，請你寫一篇短文談一談對養(yǎng)寵物狗的看法，內(nèi)容須含利弊兩方面。

提示：

1. 養(yǎng)寵物狗可給人帶來快樂，消減孤獨(dú)與煩惱，陪伴并幫助家人解決一些困難等。

2. 養(yǎng)寵物狗會(huì)占用很多時(shí)間。寵物狗有一定危險(xiǎn)性，有時(shí)會(huì)傷害孩子。另外，它會(huì)給家人和鄰居帶來噪音，污染周圍環(huán)境等。

注意：不要將上述所給的提示直接譯成英文，要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮或調(diào)整。 詞數(shù)約80左右。（句首已給出的部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

How Do You Like Pet Dogs?

Every morning, we can see many kinds of pet dogs led by the persons who walk around. Pet dogs have become a part of their lives. I think

Answer 1

【答案】

How Do You Like Pet Dogs?

Every morning, we can see many kinds of pet dogs led by the persons who walk around. Pet dogs have become a part of their lives. I think keeping pets brings joy to our life.

Actually, it is good to keep pets because pets can play with the young and accompany the old. Research also shows that living with a pet helps to relieve people’s pressure and distress and even decreases the possibility of getting heart diseases.

However, many are against living together with animals. They argue that pets are easily infected by diseases, which may pass on to humans.What’s more, the unpleasant smell and waste caused by pets are a resource of environmental pollution.

So we avoid potential risks and troubles, we have to make sure that our pets are properly vaccinated and their behaviors are under control.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，談?wù)勱P(guān)于養(yǎng)寵物的問題。要求中只給出了要點(diǎn)，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多，注意將提示的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，人稱問題較為復(fù)雜，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，如賓語從句，條件狀語從句等。注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇范文中出現(xiàn)一些不錯(cuò)的句式和短語，如become a part of成為……的一部分；What’s more而且，再說；強(qiáng)調(diào)句式， It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對某人來說怎么樣；make sure確保；以及由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。