Question

14．為了進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)中學(xué)生的安全意識(shí)，提高自我保護(hù)能力，某校開展了以"安全"為主題的英語演講比賽．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇演講稿．

【參考詞匯】
be careful，on line，danger，call…for，go bad
【注意】
1．內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；
3．詞數(shù)80左右．文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
As teenagers，we should always keep safety in mind．But how can we keep safe？Here are some of my suggestions．First，
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Answer 1

分析 ①Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health．吃變質(zhì)的食物對(duì)我們的身體有害．句子中Eating food that goes bad 是動(dòng)名詞短語做主語，that goes bad作定語修飾food，構(gòu)成定語從句；do harm to對(duì)某某有害處．
②we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river我們必須記著在河里游泳危險(xiǎn)．句子中 we must remember 后面跟的是一個(gè)賓語從句，it's dangerous to do sth做某事是危險(xiǎn)的，it作形式主語，后面的to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語作真正的主語．

解答 How to keep safe？
As teenagers，we should always keep safety in mind．But how can we keep safe？（引出話題）Here are some of my suggestions．First，we should be careful when we make friends，especially on line．Second，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe．Also，we ought to eat healthily and safely．Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health（高分句型）．Last but not least，summer is coming，and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river．In short，safety must come first!（如何增強(qiáng)我們的安全意識(shí)，提高自我保護(hù)能力）

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