Question

【題目】人生如旅，在你的成長過程中，許多人感動著你，影響著你。 “誰是我的英雄”，“我要成為什么樣的人”，現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)成了我們關(guān)注的熱門話題。Spud Webb 的事跡深深地影響著我們青少年，最近我校正舉行英語征文活動。請根據(jù)表格提供的信息完成征文。

Spud Webb基本信息	1. 個頭矮小，但夢想成為NBA球員 2.曾參加選拔，但被拒絕 3.一開始不被注意，一直為夢想而奮斗 4. 1985年成為NBA球員
對我的影響	1. 我的夢想：工人，科學(xué)家，作家，藝術(shù)家，工程師……(自選一個)
	2.怎樣實現(xiàn)自己的夢想 ①制定合適的人生計劃 ②……

要求：

對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

Spud Webb is my hero and he has influenced me most .

Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963.

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Answer 1

【答案】The person who has influenced me most is SpudWebb.

Spud Webb was born in the USA. in 1963. He is short and small,but he is very smart. He loves sports very much,especially basketball. His dream was to join the NBA in the future. So he practised hard every day to make his dream come true. Finally,he successfully became a player of the NBA in 1985.

Why is Spud Webb successful? Because he has adream in his life. He always practises hard,and he tries his best to make it come true. At the same time,his parents give a great support to him.

Spud Webb is special to me because he has influenced me greatly. I have the same hobby as him.. Many people sayhe is not tall enough to be a basketball player,but Spud Webb sets a good example for me. I'm thirsty of becoming a great basketball player: I think I have to practise hard to make my dream come true.

Spud Webb’s success shows us that everyone can achieve their dream through hard working. I'm sure I will be successful like Spud Webb one day.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹Spud Webb 的個人情況、事跡以及對我的影響。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He is……，His dream was……，He always practices……，Spud Webb is……，I think…….等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。