Question

【題目】書面表達

根據(jù)下表提示以My Sister 為題寫一篇短文。

要求：1. 語法正確，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，要點齊全，適當拓展。

2. 80個詞左右。

基本情況	Amy，13歲，短發(fā)，大眼睛,苗條
學習情況	最喜歡的學科是數(shù)學 經(jīng)常幫助同學學習
興趣愛好	喜歡打排球，聽音樂
生活方式	經(jīng)常吃漢堡、雞肉和巧克力，但很少吃蔬菜和水果； 她兩頓飯之間還吃甜食，很少運動 你對她的這種生活方式的看法 …….

My Sister

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Sister

My sister is Amy.She is 13 years old.She has a short hair.She is thin.Her favourite subject is math.Because she often helps her classmates ，her classmates all like her.She also plays volleyball and listens to music.She thinks music makes her relaxed.She often eats hamburgers,chicken and chocolate but she seldom eats vegetables and fruit.She eats sweets between two meals.She hates sports.I think she shouldn’t eat too much sweets because they are bad for her teeth.She should do sports and have a healthy eating.

【解析】

試題分析：本文介紹了自己妹妹的情況，所以句子的主語應該用第三人稱單數(shù)形式，這里是介紹她平時的情況，所以句子應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，不要遺漏提示中的要點，可以增加適當?shù)膬?nèi)容，用適當?shù)倪B詞。

寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：Because she often helps her classmates ，her classmates all like her.She also plays volleyball and listens to music.She thinks music makes her relaxed.She often eats hamburgers,chicken and chocolate but she seldom eats vegetables and fruit.She eats sweets between two meals.She hates sports.I think she shouldn’t eat too much sweets because they are bad for her teeth.用了一些連詞，如because，but，and等，增加了文章的亮點。