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【題目】張燕是九年級(jí)學(xué)生。她父親在一家公司工作，家里幾乎天天來(lái)客人。他們?cè)诳蛷d高聲談笑，有時(shí)還一起打牌，弄出許多噪音。這種吵鬧的環(huán)境使張燕無(wú)法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。她不知道如何解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你幫她給青少年輔導(dǎo)員王老師寫一封信，談?wù)勊�的煩惱并�?qǐng)王老師提出寶貴意見(jiàn)。

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【答案】Dear Mr. Wang，

My name is Zhan Yan. I’m a Grade 9 student. I have some problems and I need your help.

My father works in a company. There are always many people coming to my home. They talk to each other loudly and sometimes they even play cards together. They make a lot of noise and this is really terrible. I can’t focus on my study. I don’t know how to deal with this problem. Can you offer me some suggestions? They would be most valuable. Thanks a lot.

Best wishes！

Yours sincerely，

Zhang Yan

【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如in a company，at the beginning of，come to my home，talk to sb.，each other，play cards，make noise，a lot of，focus on，how to do，deal with，offer sb. some suggestions等。而There are always many people coming to my home./ I don’t know how to deal with this problem.等多種非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。