Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是Shirley。你的筆友李華和父母之間有一點小矛盾，想向你傾述。下面是

他給你的電子郵件。請你根據(jù)他的郵件內(nèi)容寫一封回信,談?wù)勀銓�這件事的看法和理由，

同時提出一些幫助他解決問題的建議。

Dear Shirley, Recently I had some trouble with my parents. Because the mid-term examination (期中考試) is drawing near, they both push me hard. They always ask me to study all the time. You see, I have a pet dog and I often play with him after school. But my parents don’t allow me to keep it now. I feel so much pressure. Can you be kind enough to give me some suggestions? Yours, Li Hua

要求：1. 回信須包含所有要點內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮。

2. 不少于60詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Li Hua,

I’m sorry to learn about your trouble. ________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

I hope what I said can be of some help to you.

Yours,

Shirley

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

I’m sorry to learn about your trouble.

First I want you to comfort yourself by having a nice walk outside. To keep calm is important for you to deal with these matters. In fact, I disagree with your parents’ idea. It’s true that students should work hard on their study especially when the mid-term exam is coming. However, to feed a pet dog doesn’t harm your study. It is a good way to relax yourself. We all know that we can study better after proper relaxing.

I think you should have a good talk with your parents. Tell them your ideas and your study plan. I think they will understand and support you finally.

I hope what I said can be of some help to you.

Yours, Shirley

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求以Shirley的名義，根據(jù)筆友李華寫給Shirley郵件內(nèi)容寫一封回信，動筆前先要注意認真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容；談?wù)勀銓�這件事的看法和理由，同時提出一些幫助他解決問題的建議。注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當發(fā)揮使行文連貫。為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復合句。

寫作亮點：本文要點明確，語言精練。層次分明。闡明了自己對這件事的看法，并提出了一些合理化的建議。不同要點英語使用的句式也不一樣。語言的表述符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，復合句It’s true that students should work hard on their study especially when the mid-term exam is coming.表達的非常到位。最后給出的建議也比較 合理：I think you should have a good talk with your parents. Tell them your ideas and your study plan.是一篇比較不錯的佳作。