Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的好朋友Lisa不久前參加達(dá)人秀節(jié)目被淘汰了, 她為這次失敗所困擾，無(wú)心學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封電子郵件，建議她正確地看待達(dá)人秀節(jié)目，享受參與的過(guò)程而不必太在意結(jié)果；提醒她實(shí)現(xiàn)理想的途徑有很多，只有努力才能獲得成功；鼓勵(lì)她好好學(xué)習(xí)，也不放棄個(gè)人愛好，開心地度過(guò)每一天。

要求：（1）包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

（2）字?jǐn)?shù)：60 — 80詞（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

（3）信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Lisa,

I’m sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show. I’d like to share with you my thoughts on this matter.

Yes, talent shows may change one’s future. They offer the opportunity to show one’s talents, and give people a way to make their dreams come true. Since only some people are truly talented, there is no need to take the result too seriously. It may not be good for us teenagers to become famous overnight. So just enjoy the process.

In addition, there are many ways to success, and only by working hard can you achieve your goals. As a teenager, you should spare no efforts to study and develop your interests at the same time, which, without doubt, will enrich your future life.

Hope you’ll be happy every day.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文敘述Lisa不久前參加達(dá)人秀節(jié)目被淘汰了, 她為這次失敗所困擾，無(wú)心學(xué)習(xí)。寫一封電子郵件來(lái)勸說(shuō)她，所以句子的主語(yǔ)一般用第二人稱，用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，要注意上下文的銜接，使用自己熟悉的句式，所寫的句子符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：offer the opportunity to do sth;make one’s dreams come true;;as a teenager； spare no efforts to study and develop your interests at the same time等，用了and連詞，用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制定語(yǔ)從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。