Question

假如你叫王平，是一名即將畢業(yè)的初三學(xué)生，關(guān)于初中學(xué)校生活，你一定有一些感想，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)給初一新生寫(xiě)一封信，在課堂學(xué)習(xí)、課外興趣及能力培養(yǎng)等方面提出一些建議，并陳述理由，幫助他們形成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。

學(xué)校生活	建議要點(diǎn)	陳述理由
課堂學(xué)習(xí)	努力學(xué)習(xí)功課，課上認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講； ……（自擬一點(diǎn)）	…… （自擬一點(diǎn)）
課外興趣	保持良好興趣，參加興趣活動(dòng)； ……（自擬一點(diǎn)）	…… （自擬一點(diǎn)）
能力培養(yǎng)	小組活動(dòng)積極，勇于發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)； ……（自擬一點(diǎn)）	…… （自擬一點(diǎn)）

 

注意:1.詞數(shù)90左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；

3.短文中不要出現(xiàn)具體的學(xué)校姓名和人名。

Dear friends,

As a graduating student, I'd like to share my experience in school life with you.

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

I hope you will enjoy your new school life.

Yours sincerely，

Wang Ping

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear friends,

As a graduating student, I'd like to share my experience in school life with you.

First, you should work hard at all your lessons. It’s important for you to listen carefully in class. If you have any problem with your study, you can go to your teachers.

Second, you'd better keep some hobbies, like singing and dancing. They may help you relax. There are many different kinds of activities. You need to take an active part in them. You should plan your time carefully because you will have much more homework than before.

Third, you should be active in groups in class and be brave to express your ideas. And you should learn to get on well with your teachers and classmates. Being friendly and helpful is also very important.

I hope you will enjoy your new school life.

Yours sincerely，

Wang Ping

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作條理性非常重要，使用first,second,third從三方面進(jìn)行論述。根據(jù)題意首先對(duì)課堂學(xué)習(xí)方面的建議及理由進(jìn)行闡述work hard at all your lessons. 及have any problem with your study, you can go to your teachers.然后對(duì)課外興趣愛(ài)好方面提出建議和理由You should plan your time carefully because you will have much more homework than before.最后說(shuō)明，應(yīng)該在能力培養(yǎng)方面多參加活動(dòng)，勇于表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)express your ideas.并提出自己的建議和理由Being friendly and helpful is also very important. 通過(guò)這些方面的描寫(xiě)，文章的意思表達(dá)就和題目中有機(jī)的結(jié)合在了一起。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：初中英語(yǔ)的作文，出考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力外，還要求學(xué)生能夠變換句式，學(xué)會(huì)用不同的表達(dá)，來(lái)表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思，要在“準(zhǔn)”字和“美”上下功夫。在寫(xiě)作中注意人稱(chēng)與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面，同時(shí)要學(xué)會(huì)多用副詞來(lái)修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，這樣顯示出深厚的語(yǔ)言根底。對(duì)于初三的作文，在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫(xiě)的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫(xiě)，考試時(shí)就能寫(xiě)出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。